Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack不久前去美国留学，他给你写信说很不适应那里的生活。请你根据以下提示用英语给他写封回信，鼓励他勇敢面对。

内容包括：1.了解当地生活习惯；

2.与美国同学多交流，多交朋友；

3.多参加户外活动，学习与人交往的礼仪。

注意事项：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m really glad to hear from you and know you are getting along. I think it is common for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some suggestions for you.

First of all, you should respect local customs and involve yourself in the native’s lives. Just as a saying goes, “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Secondly, don’t forget to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What’s more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.

I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoyed your stay there.

Keep in touch.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

1，文章采用了“I’m really glad to hear from ……”；“ it is common for you not to……”“Just as a saying goes”等高分句式。

2，文章采用First of all，Secondly， What’s more，Finally 等连接词，使行文更加流畅。

3，it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun.which引导的定语从句。

4，引用谚语“when in Rome, do as the Romans do”给文章增彩。