题目内容
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的作文.文中共有10处错误.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词出加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)花掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
When I went home yesterday evening,I saw a little cat laying in the middle of the road.It seemed very hunger and it was also in greatly danger,because there were many cars,buses,and trucks on the road.I showed my sad to it and asked my mother whether I could bring it home as soon as I arrive home.While she was afraid that the cat was dirty,but she agreed.However,when I got out,the poor little thing was not here.I was told that it had taken by a warm-hearted person.I breathed a sigh of relief.It is known to us all,animals are our good friends and we should care more about it.
分析 本文主要介绍作者回家时,看到一只小猫躺在路中间.它看起来很饿,也很危险.作者一到家就问母亲是否可以将它带回家.母亲同意了,但当作者出去时,可怜的小东西不在那儿了.作者被告知,它被热心的人带走了.
解答 When I went home yesterday evening,I saw a little cat laying in the middle of the road.It seemed very hunger and it was also in greatly danger,because there were many cars,buses,and trucks on the road.I showed my sad to it and asked my mother whether I could bring it home as soon as I arrive home.While she was afraid that the cat was dirty,but she agreed.However,when I got out,the poor little thing was not here.I was told that it had∧taken by a warm-hearted person.I breathed a sigh of relief.It is known to us all,animals are our good friends and we should care more about it.
详解:
1.laying改为lying 考查词语用法.lay意为"放下",lie意为"躺,平卧",此处应是后者.
2.hunger改为hungry 考查形容词.seem是连系动词,后接形容词作表语.
3.greatly改为great 考查形容词.danger是名词,要用形容词修饰作定语.
4.sad改为sadness 考查名词.show是及物动词,后接名词作宾语.
5.arrive改为arrived 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
6.去掉but 考查连词.在英语中,两个分句要用连词连接,在已经有while连接句子的情况下,but是多余的,要去掉.
7.here改为there 考查副词.根据句意:可怜的小东西不在那儿了.用副词there.
8.加been 考查动词语态.
9.It改为As 考查连词.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词是后面整个句子,先行词as在从句中作主语.
10.it改为them 考查代词.them指代句中的animals.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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36.A.go | B.apply | C.cheer | D.wait |
37.A.In addition | B.For example | C.Before long | D.As a result |
38.A.smile | B.speak | C.think | D.move |
39.A.Otherwise | B.So | C.But | D.Therefore |
40.A.day | B.course | C.job | D.camp |
41.A.perfect | B.tough | C.regular | D.potential |
42.A.land | B.quit | C.change | D.keep |
43.A.should | B.must | C.need | D.could |
44.A.practice | B.interview | C.expectation | D.experiment |
45.A.promoted | B.punished | C.selected | D.refused |
46.A.how | B.whether | C.what | D.why |
47.A.save | B.learn | C.lose | D.regret |
48.A.scheduled | B.cancelled | C.mentioned | D.gave |
49.A.inspired | B.impressed | C.touched | D.puzzled |
50.A.doubted | B.complained | C.forgotten | D.known |
51.A.challenging | B.reasonable | C.traditional | D.significant |
52.A.track | B.motto | C.belief | D.purpose |
53.A.only | B.exactly | C.properly | D.immediately |
54.A.curious | B.nervous | C.disappointed | D.interested |
55.A.better | B.easier | C.higher | D.crazier |