题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是王平,学校将组织第六届校园文化艺术节活动。请用英语给外教Mr. Robinhood写一封邮件,邀请他来参加。内容包括:
时间:下午4::20--6:00
内容与地点:5月3日:高二年级篮球比赛决赛(操场)
5月4日:“实中好声音”歌手大赛
5月5日:手抄报大赛
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:校园文化艺术节活动 Campus Art Festival
手抄报大赛:Manuscraping Paper Competition
【答案】
Dear Mr. Robinhood,
I’m very glad to tell you that a three-day Campus Art Festival, which is from May 3 to 5, will be held in our school. During the three days, the activities start at 4:20 pm and end at 6 pm. Below are the detailed arrangements.
On May 3, a final basketball match between Class 1 and Class 2 will be going on, which is sure to be a feast for the basketball fans. May 4 will see a competition named “ I’m the best singer in Shiyan Middle School” presented by us students from different grades. What you can’t miss is the Manuscraping Competition on May 5 as most students will present their art work on the billboard.
We would be highly honoured if you could join us. This festival, I believe, will be quite an experience and worth your visit.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Ping
【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达是一篇提纲作文,要求我们写一封邀请信。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】范文中最大的亮点就是运用了一些高级句式,例如:I’m very glad to tell you that a three-day Campus Art Festival, which is from May 3 to 5, will be held in our school.和On May 3, a final basketball match between Class 1 and Class 2 will be going on, which is sure to be a feast for the basketball fans.这里包含了which引导的非限制性定语从句。I’m the best singer in Shiyan Middle School” presented by us students from different grades.中的presented是非谓语动词做后置定语;What you can’t miss is the Manuscraping Competition on May 5 as most students will present their art work on the billboard.中使用了由what引导的主语从句。