题目内容
10.假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展.请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信.请他提供作品.信的内容包括:(1)主题:环境保护;
(2)展览时间;
(3)投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
(3)提示:国际中学摄影展:an International High School Students Photography Show.
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School students Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.It will start from June15th and last three weeks.Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Lihua.
分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展.请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,注意要适当拓展,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.
该句使用了who引导定语从句,修饰先行词students;
(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.
该句the last time相当于一个连词短语,连接两个并列句;
解答 Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School students Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.(介绍主题)It will start from June15th and last three weeks.(高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Lihua
点评 这类文章书写时,需要做到脉络清晰,并且观点明确,理由得当.首先审题,明白文章的话题主要是什么,也就是整篇文章的中心,其次就是要抓住题目给出的主要内容,这也就是给文章的主要脉络进行了定格,所以这类文章在书写时,对于预言逻辑能力的运用能力,词汇和句型的使用能力,文章连接的高要求较高,同时学生在书写时,对于字数也要进行适当的控制.