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4．我校校报Superview需要一些介绍中国著名省市的稿件．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍云南省的短文，并投稿．

地名	云南省（南部美丽的云彩）
位置	最云南的省份
面积	393，000平方公里
民族	拥有25个少数民族
地理特征	拥有高山，湖泊和热带雨林
稀有动物	被誉为"动物王国"，有金丝猴，亚洲象等
植物	"世界花园"，拥有世界上一半的植物物种
自然奇观	石林、虎跳峡等

要求：1．可适当填加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100词左右．
参考词汇：石林Stone Forest虎跳峡Tiger Leaping Gorge物种species
热带雨林rainforest少数民族ethnic minority．
Located in the most southwest of China，Yunnan province enjoys a popular name，beautiful clouds in the south．Covering an area of 394，000 square kilometers，it's the most diverse region of China with 25 ethnic minorities．（高分句型一）
Yunnan has its unique geographical features，which includes everything from mountains and lakes to rainforests．Because of this special geographical environment，Yunnan is also home to half of the world's plant species and rare animals，such as golden monkeys and Asian elephants and so on．（高分句型二）Therefore，Yunnan is well-known as"world garden"and"kingdom of animals"．As a land of natural beauty and mystery，Yunnan is also well-known for its breath-taking natural wonders，such as Stone Forest，Tiger Leaping Gorge，which attract numerous tourists every year．（高分句型三）
Yunnan is open to the world now．It warmly welcomes all friends to visit it．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息我校校报Superview需要一些介绍中国著名省市的稿件．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍云南省的短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：地名，位置，面积，民族，地理特征，稀有动物和自然奇观，2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Located in位于；Because of 由于；Therefore因此；be well-known for 因为…而出名；be open to对…开放；
Covering an area of 394，000 square kilometers，it's the most diverse region of China with 25 ethnic minorities．（高分句型一）
Because of this special geographical environment，Yunnan is also home to half of the world's plant species and rare animals，such as golden monkeys and Asian elephants and so on．（高分句型二）
As a land of natural beauty and mystery，Yunnan is also well-known for its breath-taking natural wonders，such as Stone Forest，Tiger Leaping Gorge，which attract numerous tourists every year．（高分句型三）

解答 Located in the most southwest of China，Yunnan province enjoys a popular name，beautiful clouds in the south．Covering an area of 394，000 square kilometers，it's the most diverse region of China with 25 ethnic minorities．（高分句型一）
      Yunnan has its unique geographical features，which includes everything from mountains and lakes to rainforests．Because of this special geographical environment，Yunnan is also home to half of the world's plant species and rare animals，such as golden monkeys and Asian elephants and so on．（高分句型二）Therefore，Yunnan is well-known as"world garden"and"kingdom of animals"．As a land of natural beauty and mystery，Yunnan is also well-known for its breath-taking natural wonders，such as Stone Forest，Tiger Leaping Gorge，which attract numerous tourists every year．（高分句型三）
      Yunnan is open to the world now．It warmly welcomes all friends to visit it．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．