Question

14．假定你是李华．在即将到来的暑假，你与朋友们计划在社区开办一个英语角（English Corner），方便英语爱好者交流练习．请你写一封信，邀请感兴趣的居民前来参加．内容包括：
1．开办目的；
2．时间：每周五下午3：00-5：00，地点：the Violet Café；
3．交流内容．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear all，
Are you an English learner who'd love to communicate with others in the language and to practise what you've learnt in class？（高分句型一）Good news for you!Our English Corner to be held this summer will certainly provide you with a rare opportunity to use the language in your daily life!（高分句型二）
Every Friday afternoon，from 3：00 to 5：00，you're more than welcome to the Violet Caféto join in our chats．A wide range of topics will be covered，including school life，sports and games．Topics may rotate and conversations will flow．If you're shy as a new comer，you don't need to feel the least bit of pressure to speak up．（高分句型三）Your presence alone will be a good learning experience．
Come and join us!We're looking forward to your participation!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华．在即将到来的暑假，你与朋友们计划在社区开办一个英语角（English Corner），方便英语爱好者交流练习．请你写一封信，邀请感兴趣的居民前来参加，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：开办目的；时间：每周五下午3：00-5：00，地点：the Violet Café；交流内容．  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：communicate with与…交流；in your daily life在日常生活中；more than 非常；join in参加；including包括；look forward to 盼望；
 Are you an English learner who'd love to communicate with others in the language and to practise what you've learnt in class？（高分句型一）
Our English Corner to be held this summer will certainly provide you with a rare opportunity to use the language in your daily life!（高分句型二）
If you're shy as a new comer，you don't need to feel the least bit of pressure to speak up．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear all，
      Are you an English learner who'd love to communicate with others in the language and to practise what you've learnt in class？（高分句型一）Good news for you!Our English Corner to be held this summer will certainly provide you with a rare opportunity to use the language in your daily life!（高分句型二）
      Every Friday afternoon，from 3：00 to 5：00，you're more than welcome to the Violet Café to join in our chats．A wide range of topics will be covered，including school life，sports and games．Topics may rotate and conversations will flow．If you're shy as a new comer，you don't need to feel the least bit of pressure to speak up．（高分句型三）Your presence alone will be a good learning experience．
      Come and join us!We're looking forward to your participation!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．