Question

【题目】在你看过的电影、电视和书中，肯定有许多场景历历在目，请你描述令你印象深刻的一个场景，并谈谈为什么。你的文章必须包括：

1.描述你印象深刻的一个场景；

2.说明你对此印象深刻的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I watched a great film named Ne Zha, which is worth watching.

The most memorable scene is towards the end of the movie when, during his only good friend, Ao Bing, suffers from the darkest moment of self-doubt, he is touched by what Ne Zha tells him: “My destiny is governed by mself not God! Whether it’s a demon or a fairy, I’ll make up my own mind!” It’s one of the most unforgettable lines from the movie.

This film tells us an important truth: your attitude determines your life. Actually, there was a time when I got tired of everything because of the difficulties I had. But ever since I watched the movie, I have entirely changed my attitude towards life. At present, I am grateful to my parents for their love and also I’ve fallen in love with my study.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于半开放式写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为半开放式写作；在你看过的电影、电视和书中，肯定有许多场景历历在目，请你描述令你印象深刻的一个场景，并谈谈为什么。你的文章必须包括：1.描述你印象深刻的一个场景；2.说明你对此印象深刻的理由。人称使用第三人称。描写影视作品时，应为一般现在时时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the most memorable scene (印象最深刻的场景)，unforgettable (难以忘记的)，important truth (重要的事实)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。