题目内容
【题目】近日,你们班就“学校每天清晨开展冬季跑操活动”进行了一次讨论。请根据以下内容,给学校英文报编辑写一篇短文:
支持(多数):增强体质;磨炼意志;放松自我……
反对(少数):单调;天气寒冷;学业繁重……
你的观点:……
注意:
1.词数100左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Recently our class had a heated discussion about the Winter Morning Jogging Activity in our school._______
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【答案】Recently our class had a heated discussion about the Winter Morning Jogging Activity in our school.Opinions are divided on this topic.
Most students are in favor of this activity.They believe that the activity in winter can not only help improve physical health but develop a strong will.Besides,it's a good way to relieve stress.On the other hand,a minority of the students are opposed to it.They think the activity is too dull.In addition,it's so cold outside that they would rather stay in the classroom to study.
As far as I'm concerned,I support the activity because it benefits us greatly.The modem society requires many qualities of us,so bookworms can't keep up with the times any longer.
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求就 “学校每天清晨开展冬季跑操活动” 给学校英文报编辑写一篇短文。考虑用用一般现在时来写。要点:支持(多数):增强体质;磨炼意志;放松自我……反对(少数):单调;天气寒冷;学业繁重……你的观点:……这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: be in favor of支持,not only …but 不仅,而且。还使用了宾语从句They believe that the activity in winter can not only help improve physical health but develop a strong will.和宾语从句They think the activity is too dull.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。