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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dormitory life is part of college life. But sometime the harmony in the dormitory is disturbed in one way or another. What is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefit all the members. On one hand you can have a good rest and put your hearts into study. On the other hand, you will have a good mood and enjoy being together. There are several ways create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoyed situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other or co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make the good friends.

On conclusion, you should try your best to build a harmonious dormitory life for our college life.

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【解析】考查副词。句意：但是有时候宿舍里的和谐被以某种方式扰乱。sometimes“有时候”；sometime“某个时刻”。根据语境，故将sometime改为sometimes。

考查连词。As引导定语从句，指代整个主句“a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefit all the members.”，从句中作主语，what不能引导定语从。故将What改为As。

考查主谓一致。主语是“a harmonious dormitory life”，是第三人称单数，根据语境，句子用一般现在时。故将benefit改为benefits。

考查名词。句意：一方面你可以好好休息并且全心全意地学习。put one's heart into“全心全意做某事”是固定短语，故将hearts改为heart。

考查不定式。way to do sth.“做某事的方式”，to是不定式符号，不定式短语“to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life”作定语修饰way。故create前加to。

考查形容词。-ing形式的形容词，表示被修饰语的特征，-ed形式的形容词表示被修饰语的特征。句意：当一种令人烦恼的情况出现时，你必须学会彼此容忍和共存。表示situation的特征用annoying。故将annoyed改为annoying。

考查连词。句意：当一种令人烦恼的情况出现时，你必须学会彼此容忍和共存。根据语境可知，前后文是并列关系。故将or改为and。

考查冠词。句意：第三，你们必须彼此共享和做好朋友。根据语境，此处表示泛指不是特指。故去掉good前的the。

考查介词。in conclusion“总之”是固定短语。故将On改为In。

考查代词。句意：总之，你应该竭尽全力为你的大学生活建立和谐的宿舍生活。由上文的you推断，形容词性物主代词用your。故将our改为your。