Question

5．一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是"十年后的我"、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文
（1）家庭
（2）工作
（3）业余生活
注意：
（1）字数100左右；  
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；  
（3）开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer．I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'll do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I'll travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是应用文，根据所给要点给英语报社写一篇征文，主题是"十年后的我"，写作要点：（1）家庭（2）工作（3）业余生活．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般将来时为主．重要短语：What is sb/sth like？（某人/物怎么样…），get along well with（与…相处融洽），in one's free time（在某人空闲时间），take regular exercise（有规律地锻炼），around the world（全世界），in a word（总之），continue to do sth（继续做某事）．

解答 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer．I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'll do a good job in whatever I do．【高分句型】（工作）In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I'll travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．（业余生活）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．