题目内容
【题目】短文改错
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One night a man came to my house and told me what a family with eight children hasn’t eaten for days. I took some rice and followed with him. When I came to the family, I gave the rice for the mother. She divided it into two, and went out, carry half of the rice with us. When she came back, I asked her, “Why did you go?” She answered, “To my neighbors. They are hungry, either.” I used to think that when we were suffered, we were so focused on ourselves that we had time for others, but what she did made me realize I was wrong.
【答案】
【1】what改为that或去掉
【2】hasn’t改为hadn't
【3】for改为to
【4】carry改为carrying
【5】us改为her
【6】why改为where
【7】either改为too
【8】suffered改为suffering
【9】time钱加no
【解析】
【1】what改为that或去掉考察引导词。That引导的定语从句做told的宾语。文意是一天晚上一个人走到我家里,并告诉我他们一家人和八个孩子已经好几天没有吃东西了。
【2】hasn’t改为hadn't考察时态。文意是他们一家人和八个孩子已经好几天没有吃东西了,表示过去发生的动作,所以要用过去式。
【3】for改为to考察不定式。文意是我给妈妈了一些大米。
【4】carry改为carrying考察语态。文意是“她”携带大米,是主动形式所以用carrying。
【5】us改为her考察人称代词。文意是 “她”携带大米,而不是我们,故人称代词使用错误。
【6】why改为where 考察引导词。 where 表示“地点”而why表示“原因’。文意是你去了哪里,询问地点,所以用where。
【7】either改为too 考察副词。Either和too表示“也”,Either通常用在否定句中,而too通常用在肯定句中。文意是我的邻居也饥饿,所以用too。
【8】suffered改为suffering 考察动名词。Ving形式表示正字发生的动作,文意是我过去常常认为当我们遭受困苦时,我们想的只是我们自己。
【9】time钱加no考察副词。文意是我过去常常认为当我们遭受困苦时,我们想的只是我们自己而没有时间去顾及他人。