Question

短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

Answer 1

【小题1】happened-happen
【小题2】to 去掉
【小题3】while—when
【小题4】and—but
【小题5】her—his
【小题6】how—what
【小题7】reached—arrived
【小题8】sent her + to
【小题9】policeman—policemen
【小题10】was去掉或加he

解析【小题1】see sb do sth，所以把happened改成happen
【小题2】home是副词不要介词，所以to 去掉
【小题3】while表示一段时间，when表示时间点
【小题4】句意是：男子想停下，但是太快了停不下，两句话是转折的关系，and改成but
【小题5】his代指the man’s
【小题6】what做do的宾语，how不能做宾语。
【小题7】reached是及物动词，arrived是不及物动词。
【小题8】sent sb  to“把某人送到”
【小题9】one of 后面接可数名词复数。所以policeman改成policemen
【小题10】while的时间状语从句没有主语，加he，或者was去掉。用while doing