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11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Today,my father and I went shopping by car.On the way back,we were catching by a heavy rainstorm.It was hard to drive with water pouring as we could hardly see that we were going.
I was scared or so was my dad.So we pulled over and parked our car next the roadside under a big tree with car lights flashed.Many other cars did a same.
We sat quietly in their car,listening to the pouring water while beating the top of the car.About 40 minutes later,the rain becomes smaller.We started the car and went home safe.What an exciting experience!

分析 本文主要讲述作者和父亲乘车去购物,在回来的途中碰上了大雨,只得停在路边.大约40分钟后,雨变小了,他们才开车安全到家.

解答 Today,my father and I went shopping by car.On the way back,we were catching by a heavy rainstorm.It was hard to drive with water pouring as we could hardly see that we were going.
I was scared or so was my dad.So we pulled over and parked our car next∧the roadside under a big tree with car lights flashed.Many other cars did a same.
We sat quietly in their car,listening to the pouring water while beating the top of the car.About 40 minutes later,the rain becomes smaller.We started the car and went home safe.What an exciting experience!
详解:
1.catching改为caught 考查固定搭配.be caught in意为"陷入; 卷入",是固定搭配.
2.by改为in 考查固定搭配.be caught in意为"陷入; 卷入",是固定搭配.
3.that改为where 考查连词.根据句意:我们几乎看不到我们将要去哪儿.where引导宾语从句,在从句中作状语.
4.or改为and 考查连词.前后两个单句表示并列关系,而非选择关系,用连词and.
5.加to 考查固定搭配.next to意为"紧靠…旁边",是固定搭配.
6.flashed改为flashing 考查现在分词.此处是"with+名词+动词现在分词"复合结构,car lights与flash之间是主谓关系,用现在分词作宾语补足语.
7.a改为the 考查固定搭配.the same意为"同样的人;同样的事物",是固定搭配.
8.their改为our 考查代词.根据句意:我们安静地坐在我们的车里.用代词our.
9.become改为became 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是已发生的事情,用一般过去时态.
10.safe改为safely 考查副词.go是动词,用副词修饰.形容词safe的副词是safely.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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