Question

15．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
请简要描述下面两幅图片内容，并简要谈谈你的感想．

．．

Answer 1

分析 本书面表达是一篇图画类的写作，要求考生按图片描写交通工具的空气污染的危害．要仔细观察分析图画的画面，按照图意写作．并且写作时注意句子的衔接，适当使用连词．同时考生还要注意的是在写作过程中所运用的时态要以一般现在时为主．除此以外，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
重要短语：
 traffic jams 交通堵塞，as our individuals，就我们个人来说，take some measures to do，采取措施做，
高分句子：
With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．With加短语做伴随状语，是文章常用的开头句式．

解答 With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．（高分句型）It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time．（提出话题）
    As the picture shows，the private car has caused many problems as well．Firstly，the environment would be heavily polluted if the number of private cars rises too quickly．The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and causes some serious problems to human health．Moreover，too many private cars will cause traffic jams instead of bringing convenience．Finally，the increase of traffic accidents has threatened the safety o f people's life． So a child says，don't kill me by vehicle's smoke noisy and heat．（描述图片）
      As far as I am concerned，as our individuals，we should prefer to choose the public transportations when we go out．And for our government，they should take some measures to limit the increasing number of private cars．（提出自己看法）

点评 在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体．