Question

5．请你以环保为话题，写一篇100词左右的短文．建议人们低碳生活，拯救我们赖以生存的地球，拯救未来．
文章要包括以下要点：
1．出行尽量步行或乘公共交通，少用私家车；
2．节约用水、电、纸张等；
3．用环保购物袋购物，不用塑料袋．
生词：低碳生活-Low Carbon Living  环保购物袋-environmental-friendly shopping bags
                      

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息针对以环保这一话题开展讨论，大家发表了不同的看法，写作时注意以下几点：1．文章主要使用一般现在时与一般将来时态；
2．文章分为三部分来写：第一部分点明当前环境问题严重，需要我们低碳生活来拯救地球；第二部分提出从哪些方面来进行低碳生活；第三部分总结文章，再次点明主题，保护环境是每个人的责任，需要大家携起手来；3．文章中的第二部分内容可以使用first of all、furthermore、lastly等连词将文章更好的衔接起来．
As a result，in order to make the earth a better place to live for the generations to come，the idea of low carbon living is more and more popular in the world．（高分句型一）
Lastly，using environmentally friendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags will greatly cut down the amount of white garbage globally．（高分句型二）
Protecting the environment needs the efforts of every one of us and every small effort of us will make a big difference for making the earth a better place．（高分句型三）

解答 How long our planet can support us is a hot issue nowadays．As a result，in order to make the earth a better place to live for the generations to come，the idea of low carbon living is more and more popular in the world．（高分句型一）
      How can we live a low carbon life？First of all，when we go to school or some other places，let's go by bike or on foot as much as possible instead of going by bus．Furthermore，let's economize on water，paper and electricity．Lastly，using environmentally friendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags will greatly cut down the amount of white garbage globally．（高分句型二）
      Protecting the environment needs the efforts of every one of us and every small effort of us will make a big difference for making the earth a better place．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．