Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Ann在一个月前来到中国上学，她发来邮件说她与同学相处方面遇到了一些问题。请你根据以下提示给她回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示理解；

2. 提出建议；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ann,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in getting along with your classmates in your new school.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ann,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in getting along with your classmates in your new school. There’s no need to be too anxious, because many teenagers may find they’re faced with the same situation when in a new environment. The problem is easy to solve if you take my advice.

To begin with, try your best to communicate with your classmates more often and participate in discussions held in your class, which is an effective way to get on good terms with your classmates. Next, being a good listener is very important, as it make the speaker feel that you are sincere. What’s more, it’s a good idea to help others when necessary, for it will enable you to develop a close relationship with them.

Hope my advice will be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Ann在一个月前来到中国上学，她发来邮件说她与同学相处方面遇到了一些问题。请你根据以下提示给她回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议；3. 表达祝愿。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be faced with(面对)；situation(情况)；to begin with (首先)；try your best (尽你最大努力)；communicate with (交流)；effective(有效的)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。