Question

15．最近，你校英文报在举办主题为"Exercise an hour every day，healthy life for a lifetime．"的征文活动．假定你是李华，请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文．
1．你对征文主题的理解；
2．你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况；
3．该运动给你生活和学习带来的益处．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头语已写好，不计入总词数．
Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇英语短文．就校英文报在举办主题为"Exercise an hour every day，healthy life for a lifetime．"的征文活动阐述自己的理解．
写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．你对征文主题的理解；2．你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况3．该运动给你生活和学习带来的益处．
重要短语：become more and more popular （变得越来越流行，受欢迎），keep on doing（一直做…），take exercises（锻炼），keep fit（保持健康），live a happy life（过着开心的生活），build up（增强），exhausting study（疲劳的学习），refresh oneself （提神，清醒头脑），the spirit of teamwork（团队精神），enrich one's life（丰富某人的生活），enjoy a healthy life（享受健康的生活）．
【高分句型一】
1．Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．
此处是动名词短语"having sports"作主语，谓语动词用单数．
【高分句型二】
2．①As we know，a person②who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life．
①此处为"as"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"a person who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life"．
②此处为"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"a person"，"who"在定语从句中作主语．
【高分句型三】
3．After school I usually spend half an hour on it，which not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 Nowadays，having sports is becoming more and more popular．【高分句型一】As we know，a person who keeps on taking exercises regularly will keep fit and live a happy life．【高分句型二】（你对征文主题的理解）
     My favorite sport is playing basketball．After school I usually spend half an hour on it，which not only builds up my body but also makes me refreshed．【高分句型三】（你喜欢的运动项目及活动情况）Playing basketball helps me relax after a period of exhausting study and improves my study efficiency．Besides，through the game，I have learned the spirit of teamwork．It is also a good way for me to make new friends．In short，playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident．（该运动给你生活和学习带来的益处）
     Come on!Let's do sports together and enjoy a healthy life!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．