题目内容
18．假如你是光明中学的李华．你的英国朋友Tom正在中国旅游，给你发来电子邮件说下周将参观你所在的城市齐齐哈尔（Qiqihar）．请根据以下要点，给他回一封电子邮件：1．询问航班情况，告诉他你将去机场接他；
2．邀请他到你家住宿；
3．介绍本地情况（天气、景点、饮食等）．
注意：1．词数100左右、
2..开头已为你写好，不计入总词；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：鹤crane 扎龙自然保护区 Zhalong Nature Reserve
Dear Tom，
I'm very happy to receive your e-mail saying that you are coming to visit my city．I can't wait to see you．
I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．
分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一封电子邮件，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：询问航班情况，告诉他你将去机场接他；邀请他到你家住宿；介绍本地情况（天气、景点、饮食等）．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为写此邮件的目的．第二部分为介绍本地得天气、景点、饮食．
重点短语与句型：
pick sb up 接某人…
fly kites 放风筝
go hiking徒步旅行
look forward to 盼望
高分句型一：Please tell me the flight that you will take and the time when it will arrive．此句用了that和when引导了两个定语从句．
高分句型二：The weather of one season is different form that of any other．此句用了代词that指代不可数名词the weather．
解答 Dear Tom，
I've received your email and I'm glad you will come to my city，Qiqihar．Please tell me the flight that you will take and the time when it will arrive（高分句型一）．I'll pick you up at the airport．（写此邮件的目的）
The weather of one season is different form that of any other．（高分句型二）Spring was warm and wet．some plants were grew and grew．In summer，the sun was shiny and shiny．It was hot and rainy．So，I didn't like summer．I like autumn which was cool and dry．We flew kites and went hiking in autumn．In winter，the days were cold．we wore some big coat．We could wear a scarf and eat hotpot．I can take you to Zhalong Nature Reserve to see crane．（介绍齐齐哈尔的天气、景点、饮食．）
I'm looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely，
Lihua
点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．
