Question

2．第二节：书面表达
人生在世，犯错在所难免，关键是对待错误的态度．请以"Learn From Mistakes"为题，根据以
下要求写一篇100-120字的短文．
1．简要阐述人们对待错误的态度；
2．谈谈你的看法并请举例说明．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，以"Learn From Mistakes"为题写一篇短文．写作要点包括：1．简要阐述人们对待错误的态度；2．谈谈你的看法并请举例说明．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：vary from person to person  （因人而异），make fulluse of （充分利用），on the contrary （相反），learn from sth  （像…学习），take sth forexample （举…为例），face up to sth （面临，面对），accumulateexperience （积累经验），succeed in doing（成功做某事），There is no shame in doing （做…没有羞耻）．

解答 We，human beings，are not always correct in our life．Itis normal for us to make mistakes at one time of another．（开头）
Despite the fact that we all make mistake，what countsmost is the altitudes towards them，which vary from person to person．【高分句型】Some people areclever enough to make full use of the experiences and avoid the same mistakesnext time．On the contrary，others might just ignore the consequences of theirmistakes and go farther and farther on the wrong path．（阐述人们对待错误的态度）
In my opinion，there is no shame in making mistakes．Whatwe need to do is to recognize out mistakes and learn from them..【高分句型】Take ThomasEdison for example，he made many mistakes and experienced lots of failure whileexperimenting with different materials for the light bulb．But he was braveenough to face up to them and accumulated some beneficial experience．Eventually，he succeeded in finding the most suitable material．From thisexample，we can learn that no one is perfect and learning from mistakes canmake us wiser that before．（谈谈你的看法并举例说明）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．