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6．假设你是李津，随着世界读书日的临近（4月 23 日），你所在的学校举办了一次"校园书展（Canpus  Book Fair）"活动．你很喜欢这次活动，想将活动情况向你的英国笔友安迪进行介绍，请写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．活动目的；举办的时间、地点
2．活动项目：读书交流、旧书交换或出售以及新书展销
3．你的个人感受；并询问安迪他所在地有关世界读书日的相关活动情况
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
4．世界读书日：World Reading Day or World Book and Copyright Day
Dear Andy，
       How are you doing these days？
I'd like to tell you something about the annual Campus Book Fair in my school．
It was held on the afternoon of last Thursday in order to encourage teachers and students to read more．The latest books of different types brought by the booksellers were displayed for us to read and purchase．Teachers and students also sold or exchanged their used books．The most attractive part of the activity is the communication about reading，through which we shared our ideas about books and life，and in return we made friends and gained knowledge and pleasure．
I like the fair very much，which not only introduced us to a lot of interesting books but allowed us to buy books at a lower price．Besides，it gave is a chance to make new friends．Do you have similar activity's in your school？
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
LiJin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息向英国笔友安迪进行介绍，写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：活动目的；举办的时间、地点；活动项目交流、旧书交换或出售以及新书展销；你的个人感受；并询问安迪他所在地有关世界读书日的相关活动情况 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in order to以便，为了；look forward to 盼望；非限制性定语从句which not only introduced us to a lot of interesting books but allowed us to buy books at a lower price及过去分词brought by the booksellers作后置定语

解答 Dear Andy，
    How are you doing these days？I'd like to tell you something about the annual Campus Book Fair in my school．
    It was held on the afternoon of last Thursday in order to encourage teachers and students to read more．The latest books of different types brought by the booksellers were displayed for us to read and purchase．（高分句型一）Teachers and students also sold or exchanged their used books．The most attractive part of the activity is the communication about reading，through which we shared our ideas about books and life，and in return we made friends and gained knowledge and pleasure．
    I like the fair very much，which not only introduced us to a lot of interesting books but allowed us to buy books at a lower price．（高分句型二）Besides，it gave is a chance to make new friends．Do you have similar activity's in your school？
    Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                    Yours．
                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．