题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是李华,今年已被一所重点大学录取,但家境贫困,难以承担大学学习的费用,你成为某慈善机构资助的对象。为此你给该机构负责人King女士写一封信表示感谢。信的内容包括:
1. 目前在大学校园的生活和学习状况
2. 将来的打算
3. 表达感激之情
注意: 1. 信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
3. 词数: 100 词左右
Dear Ms King,
I’m Li Ming. I have received your letter and schooling fees.
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Your sincerely
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Ms King,
I’m Li Ming. I have received your letter and schooling fees. I’m very grateful for your kindness and generosity.
But for your help, I couldn’t enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now. I’ve made a lot of friends here. Moreover, I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant knowledge of all subjects, which are my major. In fact, I’m making progress each day. Only in this way can I learn more and use what I’ve known to help those in need as well. Besides, I’m determined to go back to my hometown after graduation and devote myself to building my hometown, to make it more prosperous and beautiful.
Words seem to fail me when I try more to express my thanks to you, and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down.
Yours sincerely
Li hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信类应用文,考生需要根据出题者提出的要求以贫困学生李华的名义来写一封感谢信,感谢为他捐助的慈善机构。在感谢信中,考生要阐述目前现状及将来的打算,最后还要表达感激之情。按照命题者的要求,考生可以将文章分为三部分。第一部分是书信类的惯例,开门见山,表明写作的目的I’m very grateful for your kindness and generosity. 第二部分又分两个小部分,分别表明目前现状及将来的打算。最后一段再次表明感激之情Words seem to fail me when I try more to express my thanks to you, and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down。在表达过程中灵活使用各种句型,适当添加高级词汇和短语,就能完成一篇优秀的文章。
【亮点说明】
本篇感谢信中最大的亮点在于句型的灵活变化,有but for引导的含蓄条件虚拟语气But for your help, I couldn’t enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now;有which引导的非限制性定语从句 I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant knowledge of all subjects, which are my major;有only+状语位于句首,句子部分倒装Only in this way can I learn more and use what I’ve known to help those in need as well;不定式作目的状语I’m determined to go back to my hometown after graduation and devote myself to building my hometown, to make it more prosperous and beautiful等等。正文部分的几乎每句话都可圈可点,十分精彩。除此之外,本文中所使用的短语也表现出作者深厚的语言功底,例如be grateful for;so as to;make progress;be determined to do sth.;devote myself to;words seem to fail me等等。