Question

【题目】某英语报以Where does your time go?为主题向高中生征文。请你以应征者的身份写一篇短文谈谈你的时间去哪儿了。内容应包括：

简述如何安排课余时间。

反思浪费时间或时间运用不当的地方。

表述对时间的认识和今后在时间运用上的打算。

词数：120左右

I always feel busy on my weekdays. However, apart from my regular school hours, ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

I always feel busy on my weekdays. However, apart from my regular school hours, I still can spare some time to do things I like. I spend most of my time doing homework or reviewing lessons. I have about one hour to do sports or take a walk every day. Usually after meals, I surf the Internet or do some reading or listen to music to relax myself. But sometimes I spend too much time watching Korean TV plays or playing computer games, which has wasted a lot of my precious time.

Now I’m well aware that time is life. Everyone is equal in front of time. Time lost can’t be recalled. As I’m still young, I should make better use of my time to gain more knowledge and skills. I believe I’ll not feel regretful when I review what I’ve done in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，某英语报以Where does your time go?为主题向高中生征文。请你以应征者的身份写一篇短文谈谈你的时间去哪儿了。内容应包括：简述如何安排课余时间。反思浪费时间或时间运用不当的地方。表述对时间的认识和今后在时间运用上的打算。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。词数120左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体，篇章结构，语言表达的连贯性和地道性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：apart from 、spare some time to do 、which引导的非限制性定语从句、what引导的宾语从句 等都很不错。