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3．假设你是新华中学的学生李明，班里从外地转来一名同学张华，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼，请根据下列要点给他写一封信：
1．帮他分析原因，
2．给他提出建议（至少两条）
3．陈述你帮助他的具体打算
注意：1、词数：100左右；
2、信的开头和结尾已给出；
3、请在答题卡上作答
Dear Zhang Hua，
      ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，首先要写全要点，包括：分析原因，提出建议，具体方法；其次要注意用第一人称来表达；最后要注意以一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
have trouble in doing sth 做某事有困难
look down upon 瞧不起
take an active part in 积极参与
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
turn to sb for help 向某人求助
I think the biggest obstacle you meet with is yourself．
句中you meet with修饰obstacle，是一个定语从句，省略了连词that．
Only in this way can you build a good relationship with our classmates．
句中only加状语提前，句子要部分倒装．
I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．
句中whenever连接让步状语从句．

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class．So I hope I can give you a hand．【说明写信的理由】
     I think the biggest obstacle you meet with is yourself．（高分句型一） You maybe regard yourself as a newcomer and look down upon yourself．Besides，there may be some difficulty in language since you are not a native student．Thus you are too shy to communicate with classmates and teachers．【分析原因】
     In terms of these，I'd like to offer you some suggestions．First，you should try to get rid of the feelings of being frustrated and lonely．Second，you should learn to talk with others actively and take an active part in various activities．Only in this way can you build a good relationship with our classmates．（高分句型二）【提出建议】
     As for me，I'll encourage more students to study and play with you．Also，I'll help you with your study and daily life．In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．（高分句型三）【具体做法】
     I'm firmly convinced that you will soon become part of our class and you will enjoy it．
 Yours sincerely，
     Li Ming

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．