Question

11．假定你是李华，负责校英语俱乐部． 你们学校下周三晚上7点到9点将在5号楼艺术厅举行英语演讲比赛，请你写一封邮件邀请外教 Ben 来当评委，内容包括：
1．告知活动的时间地点：
2．邀请其担任评委：
3．问询是否有空
注意：1．词数 80 左右；   
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Ben，
I'm Li Hua，director of the School English Club．I'm writing toinvite you to act as one of the judges of the English Speech Contest to be held next Wednesday evening in the Art Hall of No.5 Building．The speech will begin at 7 pm．and last for 2 hours．Could you please tell me if you are available then？It's our great honor if you are willing to be present．
Looking forward to your earliest reply．
Yours，
 Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
I'm writing to invite you to act as one of the judges of the English Speech Contest to be held next Wednesday evening in the Art Hall of No.5 Building
我写信邀请你作为一个英语演讲比赛的评委将于下星期三晚上在五楼艺术厅．
高分句型二：
Could you please tell me if you are available then？It's our great honor if you are willing to be present．
你如果你可以告诉我吗？如果您愿意出席，我们将感到非常荣幸．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Ben，
I'm Li Hua，director of the School English Club．I'm writing to invite you to act as one of the judges of the English Speech Contest to be held next Wednesday evening in the Art Hall of No.5 Building（高分句型一）．The speech will begin at 7 pm．and last for 2 hours．Could you please tell me if you are available then？It's our great honor if you are willing to be present（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to your earliest reply．
                                                
 Yours sincerely
                                                 Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．