题目内容
11.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack要来你们学校学习半年,他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议,请根据以下提示用英语给他回信.1.建议骑自行车上学,自行车是学生常用的交通工具;
2.自行车价格便宜、停放容易;
3.骑自行车很方便,尤其是在交通高峰期;
4.骑自行车有益健康,利于环境保护,缓解交通压力.
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数在100---120.
Dear Jack,
I am very happy to hear from you and you are welcome o study in our school for half a year.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是一封书信应用文,向英国朋友来校学习的交通方式提出建议.要求提示较详细,考生容易把握写作要求和写作目的.考生在写作之前要认真审题,根据提示写作主要有三段内容,第一段已经给出提示,开门见山表明自己的态度及建议--骑自行车上学;第二段具体描述骑自行车的好处及注意问题;第三段结束,提出自己的希望,表达自己的祝福.另外,要注意文章的时态,用一般现在时和将来时.人称用第二人称.再有就是不能根据提示内容逐字逐句的翻译形成汉式的英语,应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次.
【亮点说明】文章符合书信的写作要求,要点齐全,表达思路明确,知识点运用恰当到位,文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如hear from,as to,recommend,no matter how busy,protect the environment并用动名词做主语,buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot;parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school;还运用了主语从句:What you should do carefully is just to…; what I have mentioned above could be helpful…注意了句子的衔接如:Here are some reasons.Firstly,Next,Actually,In this way,Hopefully等.这些词句用得恰当到位,为文章增添色彩.
解答 Dear Jack,
I am very happy to hear from you and you are welcome o study in our school for half a year.As for the question about the transportation to and from school,I'd like to recommend your riding a bicycle.(高分句型一)Here are some reasons.
Firstly,riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.(高分句型二)Next,parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school,no matter how busy the traffic could be.(高分句型三)Actually,bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.In this way,you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.
Hopefully,what I've mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school.(高分句型四)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
-This would definitely bring good results to my company.( )
A. | beneficial | B. | accessible | C. | relevant | D. | fundamental |