Question

【题目】We often hear people complain about lack of opportunity. In fact, this world does not lack opportunity. But it does make a difference if we are able to grasp it.

For example, let’s suppose that Harvard University is recruiting(招收) students in China, and the requirement is that students must score above 640 for the Test of English as a Foreign Language(TOEFL) and 2,200 for the Graduate Record Examination(GRE) for admission to the university. Have you scored those scores? If you haven’t, you may feel regret, “I would have worked harder if I had known the requirements.”

When opportunity knocks, make sure your door isn’t locked. An able man will find opportunity everywhere, while a weak one will be left with only one opportunity, and that is to complain of having to prove what he is worth in this world.

【写作内容】

1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；

2、以约120个词就“机遇”这一话题发表你的看法，内容包括：

(1) 你如何看待机遇？

(2) 我们怎样才能抓住机遇？

【写作要求】

1. 可以发表个人观点，但必须提供理由或论据；

2. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

4. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

The author seems to believe we don’t lack opportunity in our lives. He informs us through an example that what need most is the courage and ability to grasp opportunity. (30 words)

Needless to say, opportunity plays a very important part in our lives when it comes to achieving success. To some extent, almost every success involves an element of opportunity. Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something. But opportunity doesn’t often come our way.

From my point of view, all that it takes is good preparation. As a popular saying goes, opportunity favors those who are prepared. Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the coming challenges, which are golden opportunities. However, if we don’t work hard, we can do nothing but regretfully let opportunity slip off our fingers.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于谈看法的书面表达，根据提示信息的具体情况来行文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，简要概括短文，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、分析文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，覆盖所有内容要点。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something.描写了一句中国谚语；Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the coming challenges, which are golden opportunities.采用非限制性定语从句；此外，文章还使用了大量短语plays a very important part，From my point of view等。使用连词Needless to say，However使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。