题目内容
【题目】假定你叫王敏,是一名高三年级的学生,在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题,想得到老师的帮助。现在请给你的英语老师Miss Li写一封求助信,内容如下:
学习英语时你遇到的问题 | 生词多,记忆有难度;语法难,理解有障碍,写作提高有困难;…… |
请求老师提供帮助 | 讲解记单词的方法;授课时慢一些;传授学习语法及提高写作的方法;…… |
注意:1.内容包括所有要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2.词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Li,
I'm one of your students in Class Six,Senior Three. Nowadays _______________________________________________________________________________
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Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Min
【答案】
Dear Miss Li,
I'm one of your students in Class Six,Senior Three. Nowadays I find it difficult to learn English well. I find our texts full of new words that are hard for me to remember and grammar is not easy to understand. What's worse,I can't improve my writing no matter how hard I practise.
Faced with so much difficulty,I have to ask you for some advice. Would you like to introduce me to some good ways to learn new words?In the meanwhile,I hope you can teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also,I would like to learn some rules and methods to learn grammar in order to improve my writing.
I believe I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Min
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。形式宾语的使用:Nowadays I find it difficult to learn English well;定语从句的使用:I find our texts full of new words that are hard for me to remember;让步状语从句的使用:I can't improve my writing no matter how hard I practise;非谓语动词在句中的使用:Faced with so much difficulty,I have to ask you for some advice;宾语从句的使用:I believe I can make great progress in my English study with your help.连接词的巧妙使用使文章更加清晰明了:What's worse,In the meanwhile,Also.