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20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．D ear Peter，
How times flies!It had been almost a year since you leftC hina to Sweden．D uring your home stay at my home，we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything had been happened yesterday．I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much．Fortunate，I was selected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school．The visit will last on July 7th to 20th．A nd as a super soccer fan，I'd really love to visit our local soccer club．
I can't wait for the day to come where I can see you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本文主要讲述作者想念朋友，一直渴望听说朋友的事情．幸运的是，作者被选为学生代表将参观朋友的学校，特别是想参观朋友当地的足球俱乐部．

解答 How times flies!It had been almost a year since you leftC hina to Sweden．D uring your home stay at my home，we had such∧wonderful time that it seemed as if everything had been happened yesterday．I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much．Fortunate，I was selected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school．The visit will last on July 7th to 20th．A nd as a super soccer fan，I'd really love to visit our local soccer club．
I can't wait for the day to come where I can see you．
Yours，
Li Hua．详解：
1．had改为has 考查动词时态．根据时间状语从句since you left China for Sweden，要用现在完成时态．
2．to改为for 考查介词．leave  for意为"出发去"，是固定搭配．
3．加a 考查冠词．have a wonderful time意为"过得很愉快"，是固定搭配．
4．去掉been 考查词语用法．happen是不及物动词，没有被动语态，been是多余的，要去掉．
5．long改为longing 考查动词时态．此处long是动词，意为"渴望"，根据上下文语境，要用现在完成进行时态．
6．fortunate改为Fortunately 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词形式．
7．representative改为representatives 考查名词复数．one of意为"…之一"，后接可数名词复数．
8．on改为from 考查介词．from…to…意为"从…到…"，是固定搭配．
9．our改为your 考查代词．根据句意：我确实想参观你们当地的足球俱乐部．用代词your．
10．where改为when 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词the day在从句中作时间状语，用关系副词when，本定语从句是分隔性定语从句，先行词与关系副词之间被动词不定式to come隔开了．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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