Question

7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last summer，my family made a trip to Qingdao，where is famous for its beautiful scenery．After a three？days sightseeing，we took a taxi to airport．But to our surprised，my mother couldn't find her handbag when we arrived at there．
Suddenly she realized that she has left her handbag in a drawer of the hotel room．
My dad made a phone call to the hotel to see how they could do for us．Luckily，
when knowing what was happened to us，the manager arranged his assistant to bring the handbag to the airport immediately．To our relief，he made it just after we boarded the plane．This special experience made our trip was unforgettable for it proves that kindness still exists in today's world．

Answer 1

分析 短文讲述了作者一次去青岛旅行的经历，作者一家到机场才发现妈妈的手包忘在了宾馆，然后就给宾馆打电话，让他们欣慰的是，在他们登机之前宾馆就派人把包送到了机场．这段经历使得他们的这次旅行非常难忘．

解答 Last summer，my family made a trip to Qingdao，where is famous for its beautiful scenery．
                                                                           which
After a three-dayssightseeing，we took a taxi to∧airport．But to our surprised，my mother
           three-day                                             the                              surprise
couldn't find her handbag when we arrived at there．Suddenly she realized that she hasleft her
                                                           去掉at                                                    had
handbag in a drawer of the hotel room．My dad made a phone call to the hotel to see how they     
                                                                                                                           what
could do for us．Luckily，when knowing what was happened to us，the manager arranged his
                                                                  去掉was     
assistant to bring the handbag to the airport immediately．To our relief，he made it just after
                                                                                                                                before
we boarded the plane．This special experience made our trip was unforgettable for it proves that
kindness still exists in today's world．proved

1．where改为which；考查关系词，这里用关系代词which在从句中作主语，指代Qingdao．
2．days 改为day；考查名词，这是一个固定用法，当中间有连字符时，名词用单数．
3．airport前面加the；考查冠词，这里用定冠词表示特指我们要去的那个机场．
4．surprised改为surprise；考查固定短语，to ones surprise是固定搭配，意为"让某人感到吃惊的是"
5．去掉at；考查介词的用法，there是副词，前面不加介词．
6．has改为had；考查时态，根据短文内容，讲的是过去发生的事情，要用过去的时态．
7．how改为what；考查疑问词，how是意为副词，表方式，what是疑问代词，在从句中作do的宾语．
8．去掉was；考查动词，happen意为"发生"，不能用于被动语态．
9．after改为before；考查介词，根据句意应是"在我们登机前"就把包送到了机场，所以用before．
10．proves改为proved；考查时态，短文讲的是去年夏天发生的事情，所以用过去时．

点评 短文改错要先整体阅读短文，掌握短文的基本大意，在运用所掌握的词汇，语法，习惯短语等基本知识对每个句子详细分析，找出文中的错误加以修改．