Question

【题目】假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：

1．付出才有回报；

2．收获自信和友谊；

3．感激之情。

注意 1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took several days ago, I have a lot to share

with you.

For a start, I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains, no gains”. Furthermore, in the five-day competition, I established a close friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I’ve learned a lot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my tutor and the judges, without whose proper help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.

To sum up, I will always cherish this meaningful and memorable experience.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇提纲类作文。要求学生用英语给校刊写一篇文章，发表一下获奖感言。写作内容主要包括：付出才有回报；收获自信和友谊；感激之情。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节的现象。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意词数在100左右，开头不计入总词数。

亮点说明：宾语从句I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition；非限制性定语从句which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains, no gains”.和from whom I’ve learned a lot与without whose proper help...；虚拟语气without whose proper help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.；动名词做主语taking this competition；现在分词表结果thus developing my self-confidence等，语法功底深厚，使作文句式多样；

连接词：范文使用For a start, Furthermore, More importantly, Additionally, To sum up等衔接句子和段落，显得很有条理；

高级词汇与短语：delighted, establish, enable, overcome, excellent, cherish, memorable, owe...to,等，显示了较强的词汇运用能力。