Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你的同学王林最近沾染上了吸烟的毛病，请你给他写封信，劝他戒除掉这一坏习惯，信的内容包括：

1. 吸烟的危害；

2. 戒烟的方法；

3. 祝福。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang Lin,

I’ve heard that you’ve got into the habit of smoking, which I think does great harm to your health. _________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin，

I’ve heard that you’ve got into the habit of smoking, which I think does great harm to your health. You may not know that smoking can do terrible damage to your heart and lungs or that it is more difficult for smoking couples to become pregnant. What’s worse, smoking can affect the health of non-smokers. Even your classmates wouldn’t like to make friends with you.

Here’s some advice on how to quit smoking. First, be determined. Every time you want to smoke a cigarette, do something else. In fact, do anything to keep your mind and especially yours hands busy. Second, keep trying. Don’t be disappointed if you have to try several times before you stop smoking. If you weaken and have a cigarette, don’t feel ashamed. Just try again. You will succeed eventually.

I do hope you will live happily and healthily.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文属于半开放性作文，题中只给出了要点大纲，具体的要点需要考生自己添加。要求以李华的口吻给王林写一封信，劝他戒除掉这一坏习惯。使用第一人称和一般现在时。文章要点：1.吸烟的危害：危害个人身体健康；对心脏和肺部有很大影响，让人难以怀孕，同时对于不抽烟的人也有影响。2.戒烟的方法：要有决心：想抽烟时，做其他事情，让自己忙碌；如果遇见困难不要放弃，继续努力。3.表示祝福。建议文章按照要点分成三段，重点放在文章前两部分。同时要注意书信的格式，在使用合适的过渡句和过渡词。