题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你校英国交换生Tom即将回国,在给你的邮件中提到他想买具有中国特色的礼物送给家人及友人,希望你回信给出建议。内容包括:
1.对离别表示遗憾;
2.推荐一种物品及理由;
3.表示祝愿。
注意:1、词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you will be back home soon. I will miss the joyful days we spent together.
As for a gift with Chinese features, I personally recommend Chinese knots. Knot, in Chinese “Jie”, means reunion, friendship, good fortune and love. Therefore, this unique artwork has been a popular gift for a long time to express best wishes and warmest regards. I think that your friends and family members will be delighted to have them. Besides, Chinese knots are handy and light and it will be easy for you to carry around.
Wish you a pleasant and safe trip back home, and please remember that you are always welcome to come back to visit us.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本次作文要求写一封建议信。Tom即将回国想带点有中国特色的礼物,请你给他写封建议信,内容要点如下:1.对离别表示遗憾;2.推荐一种物品及理由;3.表示祝愿。
写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写,认真查验是否有漏写情况等。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了定语从句we spent together.以及宾语从句that your friends and family members will be delighted to have them.和recommend、unique artwork等词汇。