Question

【题目】短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For an example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place where I could not find . Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped others. He said he was busy. In fact，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance，in a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework，mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】want 后加to

【2】for an example 去掉an

【3】put them –put it

【4】where –that /which

【5】eats---ate

【6】making ---made

【7】angrily –angry

【8】in a cold night ---on

【9】loudly –loud

【10】difference ---different

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】want 后加to 固定词组want to do sth。想做某事。故在want 后加to。

【2】for an example 去掉an 固定词组for example例如，故把for an example 中的an去掉。

【3】put them –put it 此处it指代a chocolate cake,故把put them –put it。

4.【4】where –that /which 关系代词which/that指代place作为find的宾语，故把where –that /which。

【5】eats---ate 根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把eats---ate。

【6】making ---made 此处缺少谓语动词故把making ---made。

【7】angrily –angry 此处是形容词做宾语补足语，make 宾语+形容词，故把angrily –angry。

【8】in a cold night ---on 在某一天的上午、下午、晚上用介词on，故把in a cold night ---on。

【9】loudly –loud 此处是形容词作定语，故把loudly –loud。

【10】difference ---different be动词后面用形容词作表语，故把difference ---different。

【知识归纳】

1.以e结尾的形容词变成副词时，有的直接加ly ；有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly

immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively

2. angry--- angrily；loud--- loudly；careful---carefully