Question

【题目】假如你是高二（1）班班长李华，你们班决定本周六组织一次到你们市内一所著名大学的参观。请你给你们班的外教Mr. Jones发一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。要点如下：

1. 出发的时间、地点和交通方式；

2. 参观的具体安排和活动；

3. 你预期的收获；

4. 希望Mr. Jones参加。

注意：词数100左右。

Dear Mr. Jones,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Jones,

Our class has decided to organize an activity to visit a famous university in our city this Saturday. We will gather at the school gate at seven in the morning. Fifteen minutes later, our bus will set off and we will return at half past five in the afternoon.

On arriving there, we will be shown around the university and learn about its history. Through this activity, we can experience its rich cultural atmosphere. In the afternoon, we will do some other meaningful activities, including communicating with university professors and students. Thus we can learn some things about them such as their life, work and studies. And we will also take some photos to memorize the visit.

I hope you will show an interest in our plan and join us. I am sure that we will have a great time there.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本次书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

第一步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：① 本周六组织到市内一所著名大学的参观，邀请Mr. Jones参加；②出发的时间、地点和交通方式；③具体安排和活动；④预期的收获；⑤希望Mr. Jones参加。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：famous university（著名大学），at the school gate at seven in the morning，take some photos等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。