Question

11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（　　），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
   2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well．
    First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students．Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible．It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
    Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy．You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．Try to speak Chinese as many as possible．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介绍如何学好汉语提的建议．首先，参加一个汉语课程，向老师和同伴学习汉语；也可以看电视和读书，报纸和杂志以扩大汉语词汇；学唱汉语歌曲和结交中国朋友等．

解答 I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well．
    First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students．Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible．It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
    Besides，it is a good idea∧learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy．You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．Try to speak Chinese as many as possible．
详解：
1．advices改为advice 考查名词．advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
2．was改为is 考查动词时态．本文是对如何学好汉语提的建议，讲述的是一般事实，应用一般现在时态．
3．practising改为practise 考查词语用法．practise与前面的learn一起是be able to后的并列谓语动词，都用动词原形．
4．help改为helps 考查主谓一致．it做主语，一般现在时的谓语动词应用单数形式helps．
5．去掉the 考查冠词．in Chinese意为"用汉语"，是固定短语，Chinese前不用冠词．
6．to改为with 考查介词．familiar 和介词with连用，意为"某人熟悉…"，由句意可知，你将会熟悉汉字．用介词with．familiar和介词to连用，意为"某物为某人所熟悉"．
7．加to 考查动词不定式．it是形式主语，to learn and sing Chinese songs是真正的主语．
8．easy改为easily 考查副词．learn和remember是动词，要用副词easily修饰．
9．they改为who或they前加and 考查定语从句．前后两个分句没有连词连接，英语中不可以．they前加and，让两个句子变成并列句；they改为who，就变成friends的非限制性定语从句．
10．many改为much 考查副词．修饰动词speak用副词much．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．