假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删减:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错词下面划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Two years before，I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car．Unfortunate，I had an accident and hit another car，and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.1 called my parents，so I did not tell them what had happened．I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away，and that my mother would not sleep if she knew．Therefore，I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil．As a result，nobody knew truth．I still think that it was the right thing to do．

分析两年前作者去巴西旅行，不幸的是作者在那里出了车祸，不得不在医院呆了两个星期，为了不让父母担心，作者向他们隐瞒了这一事实．

解答 Two years before，I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car．Unfortunate，I had an accident and hit another car，and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week．1 called my parents，so I did not tell them what had happened．I knew that they willbe worried about myself because I was so farther away，and that my mother would not sleep if she knew．Therefore，I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil．As a result，nobody knew truth．I still think that it was the right thing to do．
详解：
1．before改为ago；考查近义词辨析，ago用在一段时间之后，表示"…以前"，before位于被修饰词之前，可指时间，也可指地点．
2．去掉for；考查动词，rent意为"租赁"，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，故把for去掉．
3．Unfortunately；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰整个句子．
4．去掉a；考查冠词，in hospital 是固定搭配，意为"住院"．
5．week改为weeks；考查名词单复数，week是可数名词，前面有two修饰，故用复数形式．
6．so改为but；考查连词，结合上下文分析此处表示转折关系，故用but，意为"我给父母打电话，但是我没告诉他们发生的事情"．
7．will 改为would；考查动词的时态，主句用了一般过去式，从句也要用一般过去式．
8．myself改为me；考查人称代词，分析句意为"我知道他们会担心我"，故用宾格形式me作宾语．
9．farther改为far；考查形容词，so后面要跟形容词或副词的原级形式，故把farther改为far．
10．interested改为interesting；考查分词做形容词，现在分词做形容词修饰物，过去分词做形容词修饰人，此处修饰stories，故用现在分词形式．