题目内容
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
This morning,I go to a store near my home to do some shopping.
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me was so shocked that she consequent dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment,a girl was walking by.She slipped on the oil,fell onto the broken glasses and hit her head on the floor.After a while,there was blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearer hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief,it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed wound.
分析 本文主要讲述作者去购物走过走廊时一声猛烈的咳嗽,使站在附近的一位妇女惊吓得将手中的一罐油掉在了地上.此时恰好一个女孩路过时踩在油上摔倒了,破碎的玻璃划伤了她的头,血沿着脸往下流.作者感到内疚,将她送到了最近的医院.由于不是很严重,在医生包扎伤口后,女孩的脸上有了笑容.
解答 This morning,I go to a store near my home to do some shopping.
I was walking down the passage while I gave a violent cough.The woman standing next to me was so shocked that she consequent dropped a jar of oil.For that very moment,a girl was walking by.She slipped on the oil,fell onto the broken glasses and hit her head on the floor.After a while,there was blood pour down her face.I felt really guilty and sent the girl to the nearer hospital without the delay.The doctor examined her wound carefully.To my relief,it was not serious.The girl had a little smile on her face before the doctor dressed∧wound.
详解:
1.go改为went 考查动词时态.根据时间状语This morning表示过去时间,要用一般过去时态.
2.while改为when 考查固定句型.was/were doing sth.when-did sth.意为"正在做某事,这时突然…",是固定句型.
3.consequent改为consequently 考查副词.drop是动词,要用副词修饰.
4.For改为At 考查固定短语.moment通常与at搭配.
5.glasses改为glass 考查名词.glass此处意为"玻璃",是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
6.pour改为pouring 考查非谓语动词.动词pour与修饰的名词blood之间关系为主动关系,故用现在分词短语pouring down her face作后置定语.
7.nearer改为nearest 考查形容词最高级.定冠词the后用形容词最高级.
8.去掉the 考查固定短语.without delay为固定短语,表示"毫不迟延地"之意.delay不可数名词,表泛指,不加冠词.
9.before改为after 考查连词.根据语境可知,是在医生对女孩伤口进行包扎处理之后,女孩脸上有了微笑.用连词after.
10.加the/her 考查冠词.wound为不可数名词,此处表特指,加the或her.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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