Question

【题目】假设你是学生会主席李华，为了鼓励同学们爱国读书，向优秀榜样学习。学校委托你邀请优秀校友，第24届中国青年五四奖章获得者Ms. Wei 回校演讲以激励同学们激扬青春，逐梦前行。请你写一封邀请函。

内容需包含以下几点：

1. 对其获奖表示祝贺。2. 说明邀请其演讲的目的。3. 告知演讲的时间和地点。

注意：1. 字数100字左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已经写好，不计入字数。

参考词汇：National May Fourth Youth Medal中国五四青年奖章

Dear Ms.Wei,

I am Li Hua,president of the students union of our school.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms. Wei,

I am Li Hua, president of the Students Union of our school. I am very pleased and greatly honored to invite you to give us a speech on behalf of all the students.

First of all, I’d like to extend our warmest congratulations to you on your winning this years’ national May Fourth Youth Medal. As the students studying at the same school where you once studied, we feel so proud of you and admire what you have achieved in your career. You have definitely set an excellent example for us younger generation. Inspired by your successful experience, all of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely. Therefore, we would feel much honored if you could make it to the speech. The speech is arranged on this Saturday, May 30th in No.2 lecture Hall. It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours, after which there will be half an hour question and answer session.

We hope that the lecture can fit in your schedule and sincerely look forward to your coming!

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请函。

第一步：

审题：邀请函 邀请校友Ms. Wei 回校演讲

人称：第一、二人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信的目的，第二部分对其获奖表示祝贺,说明邀请其演讲的目的，并告知演讲的时间和地点，第三部分期待她的到来。

要点：

1. 说明写信的目的：邀请她回校给同学们作演讲

2．对其获奖表示祝贺,说明邀请其演讲的目的

①表示祝贺：祝贺她获得中国五四青年奖章

②说明邀请其演讲的目的：她为同学们树立了优秀的榜样，希望她成功的经历能激励同学们不懈地努力

③告知演讲的时间和地点：本星期六5月30日上午9点，在第二报告厅

3．希望时间能够符合她的日程安排，期待她的到来

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

president of the Students Union；be greatly honored to do…；give a speech；on behalf of ；

extend one’s warmest congratulations to sb. on…； feel proud of；achieve；set an example for；successful experience；inspire sb. to do…；chase dreams；make it；arrange；be supposed to；last；question and answer session；fit in

第三步：连词成句

(1)I am Li Hua.

(2)I am president of the Students Union of our school.

(3)I am very pleased and greatly honored to invite you to give us a speech.

(4)I’d like to extend our warmest congratulations to you on your winning this years’ national May Fourth Youth Medal.

(5) We feel so proud of you and admire what you have achieved in your career.

(6)You have set an excellent example for us younger generation .

(7) We are inspired by your successful experience .

(8)All of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely.

(8) We would feel much honored if you could make it to the speech.

(9)The speech is arranged on this Saturday, May 30th in No.2 lecture Hall.

(10) It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours.

(11) After the speech, there will be half an hour question and answer session.

(12)We hope that the lecture can fit in your schedule.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用同位语连接下面两个句子

(1)I am Li Hua.

(2)I am president of the Students Union of our school.

→I am Li Hua, president of the Students Union of our school.

用分词作原因状语连接下面两个句子

(7) We are inspired by your successful experience .

(8)All of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely.

→Inspired by your successful experience, all of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely.

用非限制性定语从句连接下面两个句子

(10) It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours.

(11) After the speech, there will be half an hour question and answer session.

→ It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours，after which there will be half an hour question and answer session.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。