Question

短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Making changes can be hard, but it may benefit you a lot. Never underestimate（低估） your power to change yourself!

注意：

无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。

内容必须结合生活中的事例。

词数为120左右。

除诗歌外，文体不限。

文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Changing ourselves is not only necessary, but inevitable, especially when sometimes we are not able to change the challenging situations at all. Fighting for change is a key trait to our success and it also spirits us up and gives us a new perspective to look at the life and the world.

Something like that happened to me once. There was a time when I was laughed at by my classmates while I was walking. Puzzled about why they laughed at me, I decided to find out the answer. One of them told me that the way I walked was very strange and funny. I was overwhelmed with sadness but I just couldn’t change the way I walked. And the situation of being laughed at just didn’t stop. Therefore, I changed my attitude toward the incident. I ignored those comments on me and walked as I used to. The comments soon disappeared and I was so glad to have succeeded in the quiet war.

To sum up, we should keep changing and growing. Sometimes we need to change our life attitude; sometimes we need to change our views of seeing things; sometimes we need to be tolerant; sometimes we need to be strong. Change ourselves according to the specific situation, and our life will be full of strength and vigor.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于材料作文，也属于开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要准确把握材料的中心，然后围绕该中心来组织要点。写作时在选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型的基础上尽量使用高级词汇，而且要使所选择的句式赋予变化。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语或者名人名言来提升文章的档次，也能增加文章亮点。

【亮点说明】本篇范文属于三段式结构，不仅层次分明，段落衔接紧密，而且语言流畅自然。文章最大的亮点是高级词汇和多种句式的使用。比如inevitable、trait、vigor、 tolerant、therefore和短语spirit up、to sum up等。还有状语从句especially when sometimes we are not able to change the challenging situations at all，和while I was walking. Puzzled about why they laughed at me定语从句There was a time when I was laughed at by my classmates 并列句兼祈使句Change ourselves according to the specific situation, and our life will be full of strength and vigor.。

考点：考查材料作文