题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,新华中学学生。你校最近成立了读者俱乐部。成为俱乐部成员的要求就是要推荐一本书给同学们。请根据以下要点,写一封邮件给俱乐部负责人David。
● 祝贺俱乐部的成立;
● 推荐书籍 Harry Potter,并简单阐述推荐理由;(故事有趣,包含许多人生哲理等)
● 读者俱乐部的成立对学生的意义,并表达想成为其中一员的愿望。
注意:词数不少于80;不能逐字逐句翻译;邮件格式及开头已经给出(不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: 人生哲理 philosophies of life
Dear David,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Secondary School. ______________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Secondary School. I have learnt that our school has
set up a reader club. I’d like to be one of the members, so I’m writing to apply for it.
First congratulations on the foundation of the club,which will make contributions to the growth of the students and make great sense of our school life. I heard that everyone who wants be a member of the club should introduce a book to it. I recommend an interesting book called Harry Potter, which also can tell us a lot of life philosophy. In fact, I have read Harry Potter for at least 3 times and I think it is of great benefit to its readers.
As far as I’m concerned, being a member is helpful to colour my school life. Besides, by helping others, I can make a small contribution to school.
I’d appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】题目要求用英语写一封申请信,申请成为一名英语志愿者老师。是常见的书信作文,写作的要点已经给出,按要求从写信目的,自我介绍与自我优势,对工作的认识等方面着手。用第一人称进行写作,对自己的评价尽量客观。注意书信的格式,标点和书写规范。
范文注意使用As far as I’m concerned, Besides,来衔接段意和句意,做到了语意连贯。范文使用了一些重点语法知识,如:宾语从句I have learnt that our school has set up a reader club; 非限制性定语从句which will make contributions to the growth of the students and make great sense of our school life,固定句型I’d appreciate it if...,动名词作主语being a member...等;语法功底较扎实。范文还使用了较多的短语I’d like to, apply for, As far as I’m concerned, make a contribution to, look forward to等,使作文显得充实,有内涵。