题目内容
15.假如你是李华,请给你的笔友Tom写封信,告诉他你叔叔李大明将要去他所在的城市New York开会,并给他带去他最喜欢的一幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明:航班号:CA985
到达时间:5月6日上午11:30
你叔叔李大明的特征:…
注意:1.词数在100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Daming is going to your city for a conference,and I've asked him to bring you your favorite Chinese painting.
Also,I'd like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,May 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一封要求对方接机的书信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称;时态以一般现在时态为主.内容包括:一接机原因;二接机要求;三叔叔李大明的特征.
高分句型:
1.I'd like you to do me a favor.句子里do me a favor表示"帮助某人".
我想要你帮我一个忙.
2.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?句子里 since 引导原因状语从句.
你可以去机场接他然后送他去旅馆吗?因为这是他第一次到美国.
解答 Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Daming is going to your city for a conference,and I've asked him to bring you your favorite Chinese painting.(接机原因)
Also,I'd like you to do me a favor.【高分句型一】Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?【高分句型二】Thank you in advance!(接机要求)
His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,May 6.My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.(叔叔李大明的特征)
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 考查提纲类作文.
这是好几年前的高考作文.它很简单,但是也从另外一个角度说明,高考作文不能一味的追求高分句型,还是要以表达正确为主要目的.