Question

5．假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封投诉信，内容可涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境和服务等．
注意：（1）可适当添加细节使文章连贯；词数100左右；
（2）信得开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear President，
My name is Li Ming，a junior from the Civil Engineering School．I am writing to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school．
The foc us of the complaint is the poor qua lity and high price of the food．In the first place，the rice is very hard，the steam bread is often cold，and the vegetables are always overcooked．In addition，the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily，Under these circumstances，I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life．
I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously．I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible．Thank you for your time and kind consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming   

Answer 1

分析 这是就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封投诉信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明书信目的；二投诉的问题；三表示感谢．
高分句型：
1．In addition，the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily．句子里In addition和In the first place呼应，表示"此外"； so…that 表示"如此…以至于"．
此外，饭菜的价格太高，以至于贫穷的学生负担很重．
2．I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible．句子里do 是强调谓语动词hope的助动词； as soon as possible表示"尽快"．
我希望餐厅的服务能够尽快提高．

解答 Dear President，
    My name is Li Ming，a junior from the Civil Engineering School．I am writing to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school．（点明书信目的）
    The focus of the complaint is the poor qua lity and high price of the food．In the first place，the rice is very hard，the steam bread is often cold，and the vegetables are always overcooked．In addition，the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily．【高分句型一】Under these circumstances，I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life．（投诉的问题）
    I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously．I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible．【高分句型二】Thank you for your time and kind consideration．（表示感谢）
                                           Yours sincerely，
                                                 Li Ming

点评 考查开放类作文．
开放类作文给的要点比较少，这就要求学生发挥想象，确定写作要点，但是切记要点贴题，如果跑题了，则会影响得分．