Question

7．假如你叫小明，是某市某中学学生．最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征寻住宿家庭，你有意申请．请根据下表提供的信息用英语给校长写封信，说明你的理由．
申请理由：

住房条件	宽敞、整洁、环境优美
语言优势	擅长英语，父母是英语教授，不会有交流困难
接待经验	上个月接待过两名美国学生
参观游览	父亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜
其他	…（内容由考生自己添加）

注意：1．文章必须包括所有要点．
   2．词数：100左右．信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students．Dear sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students．
We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
Looking forward to your reply．
Sincerely，
Xiaoming．
Sincerely，
Xiaoming．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．
该句型使用which引导的一个非限制性定语从句，which指先行词a large and clean house；
（高分句型二）  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
该句使用了  I would greatly appreciate it if…如果…我会很感激的…
高级词汇：lie in坐落于；have any difficulty in 做某事有困难；places of interest 名胜古迹； appreciate 感激；

解答 Dear sir，
    I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students．
   （介绍住房条件） We have a large and clean house，which lies in a beautiful area of the city．（高分句型一）I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English，so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers．（语言优势）My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car．（接待经验）Last month we received two American students．We had a great time．Besides，my mother cooks well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．
  （高分句型二）  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them．
    Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                             Sincerely，
                                                                                                             Xiaoming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧