[题目]基础写作[写作内容]根据以下所给的信息.介绍苹果公司的最新产品苹果智能手表.产品名称:苹果牌智能手表外形特点:它被视为戴在手腕上的小型计算机, 采用了蓝宝石屏幕与Force Touch触摸技术.有银色.金色.红色和白色等多种颜色供选择.功能:可以发邮件.短信.支付网购产品和导航,智能手表还可以监控佩戴者的健康状况和强壮程度.如题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】基础写作

【写作内容】

根据以下所给的信息，介绍苹果公司的最新产品苹果智能手表。

产品名称：苹果牌智能手表

外形特点：它被视为戴在手腕上的小型计算机, 采用了蓝宝石屏幕与Force Touch触摸技术，有银色、金色、红色和白色等多种颜色供选择。

功能：可以发邮件、短信、支付网购产品和导航；智能手表还可以监控佩戴者的健康状况和强壮程度。如果想使用智能手表的大部分功能，最好与iPhone同时使用。

价格：＄349~＄10,000

购买信息：4月10号接受预定，4月24号在美国及其他8个国家出售。

参考词汇：蓝宝石屏幕 Sapphire screen 预定 pre-order 导航navigation services

【写作要求】

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

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【答案】

Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from. At the touch of the screen, not only would you be able to send e-mails or messages, but also pay for online goods and enjoy the navigation services. In addition, this gadget (small device) can monitor the customer’s health and fitness. If you want to make the best of Apple Watch applications, you are recommended to own an iPhone. You can place an order for Apple Watch on April 10, which is expected to be put on the market in the United States and eight other countries on April 24, with prices between $349 and $10000.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类写作，要求我们就题目中所给内容写一段作文。此篇文章中要点已给出，并且题目要求只能用五个句子完成写作，于是不难观察发现题目中所给出的要点也只有五条，所以可以针对每一条信息写一句话，完成写作。题中已经将写作中可能遇到的难词罗列出来，在写的时候可以直接套用。此篇写作与其他提纲类写作不同，限定了用5句话，所以不能像以往的写作一样扩展太多。要注意在写作的时候要读懂题目中想要表达的意思，并且尽量不要让句子太过复杂和繁琐。另外写作时切记需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。同时在写作时要注意使用高级的词汇与高级的句型，不要遗漏任何的要点，同时要使用合适的连接词来连接整个文章，使文章更有条理性。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，用了很多并列结构以及从句将长篇内容概括成五个句子，例如第一句Apple Watch, a newly launched product by the Apple Company, is a wrist-top micro-computer with a Sapphire display integrating Force Touch technology, and a range of colours from silver, golden, red to white for customers to choose from，用一个长复杂句将题中意思概括，为文章增色不少。

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