题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李明,是一位中学生,经常收听校广播电台的音乐节目。请你用英语给音乐节目主持人Miss Zhang 写一封100词左右的信,信的要点如下:
1、 你很喜欢这个节目,特别是英文歌曲;
2、 你经常收听这个节目,特别是学习很忙,感到很疲劳是;
3、 你从英文歌里学了很多单词;
4、 你还喜欢很多流行歌曲,特别是周杰伦的歌曲;
5、 祝愿这个节目越办越好。
【答案】
Dear Miss Zhang,
I’m a student of our school. And I like your music programme so much, especially the English songs, that I listen to it as long as I am free.
As a student, I’m busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will listen to your programme, and I’m glad to tell you that I’ve also learned many English words from some English songs. Besides, I like many popular songs, of which Jay Chou’s songs are my favorites.
I hope the programme will become more and more popular among our students with your efforts.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说书信类作文,根据提示信息和具体要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、书信类文章首先要注意的是格式问题,要在正确的格式下进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如especially the English songs,插入语;As a student伴随状语;When I feel tired, I will listen to your programme时间状语;I’m glad to tell you that I’ve also learned many English words from some English songs.宾语从句;Besides, I like many popular songs, of which Jay Chou’s songs are my favorites.定语从句等。此外,文章还使用了大量短语 listen to,as long as,be busy with,be glad to do,learn from,with your efforts等。以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。
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