Question

1．假如你是李华．你的美国朋友Mike最近因学习压力大患上了轻度的焦虑症（anxiety disorders），写信向你求助．请你用英文给他回一封信，就如何处理压力给他一些建议．
注意：词数100左右（信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数）．
Dear Mike，
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorders due to the great stress of studying．
Here I would like to give you some suggestions about dealing with your stress．
First，you ought to learn to study hard as well as relax if necessary．As an old saying goes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．When tired，you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates．Secondly，as is well known，stress is to us what water is to fish，but do not give yourself too much stress or you may feel frustrated and tired，which is bad for your health．Thirdly，I think it would be beneficial if you could share some of your inner emotions with your friends，parents or teachers．
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）When tired，you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates．
该句使用when引导的 时间状语从句，当…时候，省略了 主语和be，即when you are tired；
（高分句型二）as is well known，stress is to us what water is to fish…
首先该句使用as引导的非限制性定语从句，as意思是正如；复杂句式A  is to B what C is to D…意思是A对B来说如同C对D…
高级词汇：deal with对付；if necessary如果必要的话； frustrated 沮丧的；beneficial有好处的；

解答 Dear Mike，
       （首先表达同情之心）I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorders due to the great stress of studying．（主题句）Here I would like to give you some suggestions about dealing with your stress．
    （建议一）   First，you ought to learn to study hard as well as relax if necessary．As an old saying goes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．（高分句型一）When tired，you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates．（建议二）Secondly，（高分句型二）as is well known，stress is to us what water is to fish，but do not give yourself too much stress or you may feel frustrated and tired，which is bad for your health．（建议三）Thirdly，I think it would be beneficial if you could share some of your inner emotions with your friends，parents or teachers．
       I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
                                                                                                                                Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．