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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday morning,I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital.The other day when he was going to cross a street,he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green.But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them.It was too late for Allee to escape.He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away.He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation.When I went to see him,he was out of dangers but still looked pale.I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible.

1.surprising→surprised

2.has→had

3.such→so

4.to去掉

5.while→when

6.them→him

7.or→and

8.operation前加an

9.dangers→danger

10.sincere→sincerely

【解析】

试题分析:本文是一篇记叙文,写了我的好朋友出车祸的过程。

1.surprising→surprised考查形容词。surprising修饰的是事物,而surprised修饰人,所以用surprised。

2.has→had考查过去时。时间是yesterday,所以用had。

3.such→so考查副词。such后面应是名词,so后面是形容词,所以用so。

4.to去掉。see to do是一个过程,而看到的只是一个动作,所以to去掉。

5.while→when考查副词。当…的时候应该用when,如果是转折或者同时进行用while,所以此处用when。

6.them→him考查代词。主语是he,所以宾格形式用him。

7.or→and考查连词。前后是并列关系,所以用and。

8.operation考查冠词。前加an文中operation是可数名词,所以加冠词an。

9.dangers→danger考查名词。danger是不可数名词,没有复数,所以改为danger。

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考点:考查动词名词等的用法

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