假如你是李华.你的笔友Mike向你询问深圳锦绣中华的简要情况.现你给他回信.内容包括:[写作内容]地理位置广东省深圳湾华侨城占地面积约30万平方米开放时间9:00-18:00旅游景点共分三大类:(1)古建筑类:如万里长城.故宫.圆明园,(2)山水名胜类:如漓江.西湖,(3)民居民俗类:如傣族村寨.侗族鼓楼等.它们都以著名的名胜古迹为模型建造出来的．现状是世界上面题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike向你询问深圳锦绣中华的简要情况，现你给他回信，内容包括：
[写作内容]

地理位置	广东省深圳湾华侨城
占地面积	约30万平方米
开放时间	9：00-18：00
旅游景点	共分三大类：（1）古建筑类：如万里长城、故宫、圆明园；（2）山水名胜类：如漓江、西湖；（3）民居民俗类：如傣族村寨、侗族鼓楼等，它们都以著名的名胜古迹为模型建造出来的．
现状	是世界上面积最大、内容最丰富的实景微缩景区

参考词汇：华侨城：Overseas Chinese Town          锦绣中华：Spendid China
分类：categories                       故宫：Palace Museum
圆明园：Summer Palace                 山水名胜：natural landscapes
民居民俗：folk dwellings and customs     鼓楼：Drum Tower
实景微缩：imitated miniature
[写作要求]
1．需要含表格中的内容，可以适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译；
2．开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文章中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4．字数：100词左右．
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．
Dear Mike，
It's my honor to introduce one of the most attractions in Shenzhen to you．                 ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息现给他回信并介绍深圳锦绣中华的简要情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从地理位置，占地面积，开放时间，旅游景点和现状几个方面来介绍 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：an area of面积；is located in位于；places of interest名胜古迹；
Spendid China，covering an area of about 300，000 square metres，is located in Overseas Chinese Town by Shenzhen Bay，Guangdong Province．（高分句型）
It is known to the world as the largest and most abundant imitated miniature scenic spot．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Mike，
    It's my honor to introduce one of the most attractions in Shenzhen to you．Spendid China，covering an area of about 300，000 square metres，is located in Overseas Chinese Town by Shenzhen Bay，Guangdong Province．（高分句型）It opens at 9：00-18：00．The whole site of Spendid China is roughly classified to be three categories，namely，historic buildings，like the Great Wall，the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace； natural landscapes，such as Li River，West Lake； folk dwellings and customs，like Village of Tai People，Drum Tower of Dong People and so on．They are all modelled after the famous places of interest in China．It is known to the world as the largest and most abundant imitated miniature scenic spot．（高分句型）
                                                           Yours，
                                                           Li Hua

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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7．He can't figureout why he failed the exam．

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赞成的理由	1．放烟火庆祝元宵节是我们的传统； 2．增加节日气氛．
反对的理由	1．浪费金钱； 2．造成空气的污染； 3．带来安全隐患上．
你的看法	…

1．_______ it is to get together with friends and relatives at the Spring Festival!（　　）

8．Sometimes people add to what they say even when they don't talk．Gestures are the"silent language"of every culture．（31）D．
In the United States，people greet each other with a handshake in a formal introduction．The handshake must be firm．（32）G．Friends may place a hand on the other's arms or shoulder．Some people，usually women，greet a friend with a hug．
（33）A．When two people talk to each other，they usually stand about two and a feet （69centimeters） away and at an angle，so they are not facing each other directly．Americans get uncomfortable when a person stands too close．If this happens，they will move back to their space．If Americans touch another person by accident，they say，"Pardon me．"or"Excuse me．"（34）E．If you don't do so，it means you are bored，hiding something，or are not interested．But when you are staring at someone，it is not polite．
For Americans，thumbs up means yes，very good，or well-done； thumbs down means the opposite．To call a waiter，raise one hand to head level or above．To show you want the check，make a movement with your hands as if you are signing a piece of paper．（35）C．Americans shake their first finger at children when they scold（训斥） them and pat them on the head when they have a good opinion of them．
A．Space is important for Americans．
B．American leaders often look very serious，who seldom have smiling faces．
C．It is all right to point at things but not at people with the hand and the first finger．
D．It is important to know the body language of every country，or we may be misunderstood．
E．Americans like to look at the other person in the eyes when they are talking．
F．Smile is the most universal expressions in the world．
G．If the handshake is weak，it is a sign of weakness or unfriendliness．

5．外籍教师Richard 想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式．假设你是李华，经过调查（survey）之后，以"The Way I Go to School"为题，根据要点提示写一篇英语短文，向Richard介绍你们班同学和你自己到校的方式．调查结果如下：

percent	35%	25%	20%	20%
way	公汽	地铁	私家车	骑单车或步行

要点：
1  描述调查结果．
2 你自己的上学方式以及原因（至少两个）．
要求：文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；字数100左右．

          Yours，
Li Hua．

17．Smiles and tears are part of life．But do you find enough time for laughing？I'm not asking if you experience lots of good times．Of course，we should laugh during the happy times．（71）E．
（72）DBut she wrote one about a more serious subject--cancer in children．The book is titled I WANT TO GROW HAIR，I WANT TO GROW UP．Erma talks with many children who have cancer and learns important lessons from them．She learns，for example，that cancer survivors know how they should smile at life，though they are receiving chemotherapy（化疗）．
（73）F．Jessica's leg was cut off at the knee because of cancer．She was learning to wear a prosthesis（假肢）．Jessica told about playing soccer．She hit the ball hard with her foot．The ball flew off in one direction while her man-made leg flew another way．Then the brave girl lay on the floor，laughing happily．
As the saying goes，"（74）C"Do you find plenty of time to laugh？
You can，if you find reasons to laugh during the difficult times．Survivors know how to laugh．If you can laugh even when you're in trouble，you will make it．Remember，laugh and the whole world laughs with you．（75）B．

A．We just laugh about it．
B．Cry and you cry alone!
C．There's a time to cry and a time to laugh．
D．Erma Bombeck is known for her funny books．
E．But do you also laugh during the difficult times？
F．She tells about the experience of 15-year-old Jessica．
G．I still remember those happy days when we were at college．

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