Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom在疫情期间(the epidemic period)不得不居家学习，但又经常和父母争吵，他发来email向你寻求帮助，如何解决这个问题。请给他回复。

内容包括：

1. 首先时间要用在学习上；

2. 注意形成好的作息习惯；

3. 还要适当地做些家务。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom

I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in dealing with your parents. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to get along well with them. My advice is as follows.

To start with, we should devote our time to our study instead of killing time in playing on virtual games or something Equally importantly, we should develop a good habit of living. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealth and wise. If possible, you'd better help your parents around the house, which is of great benefit to the whole family

If you follow my advice, you will be in harmony with your parents.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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这是一篇应用文。本篇要求作者给朋友Tom写信，给他提出解决和父母经常吵架的建议。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 首先时间要用在学习上；

2. 注意形成好的作息习惯；

3. 还要适当地做些家务。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

have trouble in doing sth./ deal with/ make efforts to do sth./ get along with/ to start with/ instead of/ help sb. do sth./ follow one’s advice/ be harmony with

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing that you are having trouble in dealing with your parents, I feel nervous and concerned.

2. Honestly speaking, this phenomenon is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to get along well with them.

3. My advice is as follows.

4. To start with, we should devote our time to our study, after all, playing on virtual games or something is a waste of time.

5. Equally importantly, we should develop a good habit of living.

6. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise.

7. If possible, you'd better help your parents do some housework, which is of great benefit to the whole family.

8. If you follow my advice, you will be in harmony with your parents.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）