Question

【题目】请你根据下面这幅漫画，用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：

1. 简述漫画的内容；

2. 分析漫画反映的社会问题，并阐述其产生的原因；

3. 发表自己的感受，并给出解决此问题的措施。

【注意事项】

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数150字左右。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

参考词汇：nutritive products 营养品

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Answer 1

【答案】As is vividly shown in the picture, the department store which sells children’s nutritive products is being surrounded by crowds of parents, making the saleswoman very busy. In contrast, the neighboring department selling similar products of the old seems unpopular. The saleswoman can not help falling asleep.

The picture reflects a common social phenomenon—people tend to care more for their children than their parents. There are several reasons accounting for it. For one thing, young couples are eager to prepare their kids for a bright future by raising them healthily. For another thing, young couples fail to spend time with their old parents because they are too busy with their work.

From where I stand, showing respecting for the old is a traditional virtue of China. Busy as people are, the duty should not be ignored and every one should go back home to accompany their parents as often as possible.

【解析】本文是漫画作文。图画作文的写作要领：1、根据提示，准确审题。要注意文体，人物和时态。2、认真读图，把握情境，进行图文转换。这是关键。要根据图画中的人物及背景，确定人物之间，人物与背景之间的关系。从整体上把握所呈现的主要内容，围绕特定的主题合理想象。然后将图画所传达的信息以文字的形式呈现出来，并对转换后的内容重新组合，确定主要内容。3、发表感想。围绕主题展开合理的想象，发表自己的联想或感想。4、确定段落，拟好提纲，斟酌词句，组句成文。

分析这两副图，主要讲述了现代社会的一种现象：现代人由于忙于工作而忽略了年迈的父母，但却对自己的孩子关心备至。原因之一，因为工作忙无法与父母在一起。而年轻夫妇渴望通过健康地抚养孩子，让他们有一个光明的未来。

亮点分析：文中要点齐全，结构合理，层次清晰，行文连贯。句式灵活多变，主动语态与被动语态交错。复合句中的定语从句，状语从句，名词从句，复杂句都有出现，还运用了由as引导的倒装句。文章中还多处出现了非谓语作定语、主语及状语等，从而增加文章的可读性。文中的连词如“For one thing,…For another thing,…”等的使用，让文章条理清楚，逻辑严密。使用一些高级词汇如“In contrast, can not help falling asleep，fail to spend time，show respecting for，tend to care more for… ，as often as possible.”等高级词汇的运用，使自己的文章更有文采。文中的从句及非谓语的用法如下：

复杂句：Busy as people are, the duty should not be ignored and every one should go back home to accompany their parents as often as possible.

定语从句：As is vividly shown in the picture, the department store which sells children’s nutritive products is being surrounded by crowds of parents

状语从句：young couples fail to spend time with their old parents because they are too busy with their work.

倒装句式：Busy as people are, the duty should not be ignored and every one should go back home to accompany their parents as often as possible.

非谓语作结果状语：making the saleswoman very busy.

非谓语作定语：the neighboring department selling similar products of the old seems unpopular. 和There are several reasons accounting for it

非谓语作方式状语：prepare their kids for a bright future by raising them healthily.

非谓语作主语： From where I stand, showing respecting for the old is a traditional virtue of china